I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
You have written a great story for the 5 word challenge, Carlos. I like the way you have linked it to our current situation and being in Lockdown. I wonder if next time, you could also include a brief explanation about what you had to do for the challenge. 😊 Keep up the great work.
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You have written a great story for the 5 word challenge, Carlos. I like the way you have linked it to our current situation and being in Lockdown. I wonder if next time, you could also include a brief explanation about what you had to do for the challenge. 😊 Keep up the great work.
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