I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
the reason i made shoes is because I was sitting at my house and heard the waves of the ocean and I picked this type of shoe because it is one of my favourite type of shoes .
Hi, it's Emily from Grey Main School. I really like your shoes that you made. Next time maybe add full stops and capital letters. Why were you designing shoes? Keep up the good posts.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something I have done well. Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Hi, it's Emily from Grey Main School. I really like your shoes that you made. Next time maybe add full stops and capital letters. Why were you designing shoes?
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good posts.